梦中双蝶 发表于 2011-2-5 22:49   全显示 1楼
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评语：此文虽然有点流水帐的味道，但生活气息浓郁，显得真实自然。人妻虽然多，但各有各的特色。

      如果作者能把每个人妻的形象和容颜与性格描写得在细腻鲜明一些。把人妻那种对权势人物心理的服从与软弱。背夫与别的雄性性交时那种心理纠结和欲望难满的情感描写到位，我想这篇就成精彩的文章了。
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